Unforgettable Moment
I was gradeated from Modern Boarding School. I had many friends there and most of them lived in different cities, thats why we were so difficult to seen each other. But, through a year, the day what we expected has come. We sould gather in Surabaya for East Java consulate. It was wonderful and unforgettable moment to met with old friends.
We had lost communication since graduated from school, then my friend attemped to gathering us on July-August. This idea nearly failed, because we were in busy with our jobs and study at that time. But, we still shared the invitation on facebook, no matter what. Luckyly, in the day we met, they were coming from Gresik, Madura, Sidoarjo, Kediri and everyone was happy. I started to share my story while I was become new student of university. We talked more about our memory in boarding school, and then we watched a cinema, had a diner, took pictures, looked around of Surabaya at night, we went to kenjeran beach too. We comeback at 10.45 to Kartika’s house. We were enjoyed that night already. Everybody agreed that, the day we had spent together would be never forgot forever.
5 komentar:
bunga,
i found mistakes in your posting
"thats why we were so difficult to seen each other."
1. that's why we were so difficult to see each other
"then my friend attemped to gathering"
2. then my friends attempt togather
I'm going to correct your assigment.
1. "I was gradeated from Modern Boarding School"
= it should be "I was graduated from Modern Boarding School"
2. "This idea nearly failed, because we were in busy with our jobs and study at that time"
= it should be "This idea nearly failed, because we were busy with our jobs and studied at that time"
1. "thats why we were so difficult to seen each other"
>> that's why we were so difficult to see each other
2. "We sould gather in Surabaya for East Java consulate. It was wonderful and unforgettable moment to met with old friends."
>> We should gather in Surabaya for East Java consulate. It was wonderful and unforgettable moment to met with old friends
I think your past moment is wonderful bunga..
:)
Thank you guys for giving me the comments.
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