A Busy Colony Of Ants
Small black ants, they have six legs, and sharp teeth to cut of the leafes, they likes sweets. Also, they works and lives as a colony in a nest. Sometimes, they stay on the branches of tree, under ground, or in my case they have been staying in my garage. I have tried to destroy them many times, but they still there. I see those ants crowd around their nest and makes the line up on the wall. Sometimes they spreads out in each corner of my house, it was so annoying. Becareful not to drop the liquit or sweets on the floor, because ants will be there soon. Those ants takes and collects the sweets were leftover on the floor. They never stop to pick up the foods to their nest. Ants are always working in a group, they can carry a heavy load by their small mouth. Occasionally, they carry out their eggs to remove in another place.
I see them always looks busy, they works and line up in a whole day and appear less at night. Is that possible they sleep at night?.
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"Also, they works and lives as a colony in a nest."
you have to change with "Also, they work and live as a colony in a nest."
"Ants are always working in a group,..." it should be "Ants always work in a group,...". Always is present tense. :)
"they works and line up in a whole day,...." it should be "they work and line up in a whole day,..."
Hi bunga :)
I'm going to correct your writing
Becareful not to drop the liquit or sweets on the floor
=> it should be " Be careful don't drop the liquid or sweets on the floor. "
1. and sharp teeth to cut of the leafes,-->and sharp teeth to cut of the leaves
2. but they still there.-->but they are still there.
Thank you for your comments.
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